Letter to Myself

[Guest Angel Heart]

This letter was pretty cool when I wrote it... Now it seems kind of cheesy to me.

Reality

A Letter to Myself

From: current 17-year-old me

To: 14-year-old me

Why can't you see

Reality?

Your soul is breaking

Your skin is aching

Or should I say-

You're aching inside your skin...

Why can't you see

Reality?

Your silent crying?

Your soul is dying

You're growing masculine and hairy

Isn't it scary?

Stop hiding your pain

-from yourself

-from others

You need to find yourself

You're trapped in a young man's body

Girl, you need to see

Reality

[Guest SusanB]

Cheesy yes, but i liked it

[Charlize]

I like it as well.

Hugs,

Charlie

[Guest Deenah]

[Guest Paradox]

That is what I call "a moment of the soul." Those are quite beautiful to me. Purity, self confession, what is not to like?

Anyone can call me corny, but I like it! Quite a bit actually.

[Guest]

No whine, no cheese, just your soul speaking out to me. I really like it. Maybe it should be moved into Poetry Forum next week too, so it doesn't get quickly lost in the sauce. These words will help someone, old or new, here someday. Thanks for sharing. Hug. JodyAnn

[Guest Angel Heart]

That is what I call "a moment of the soul." Those are quite beautiful to me. Purity, self confession, what is not to like?

That is so true!

No whine, no cheese, just your soul speaking out to me. I really like it. Maybe it should be moved into Poetry Forum next week too, so it doesn't get quickly lost in the sauce. These words will help someone, old or new, here someday. Thanks for sharing. Hug. JodyAnn

You are very welcome. And yes, that would be excellent to move it into a Poetry Forum. I looked for a while, but couldn't find one - so I just put it in general.

[VickySGV]

You are very welcome. And yes, that would be excellent to move it into a Poetry Forum. I looked for a while, but couldn't find one - so I just put it in general.

Since you guys had this idea of where it should be, look what I did, I did leave a link in the general forum for you.

One of these days I will get around to putting some of my stuff here too.

[Guest Angel Heart]

That's great! Thank you!

[Guest Melissa~]

Love it! If it were not for the paradox effects I'd totally send something like that to the ten year old me and my mom, just as soon as I have access to a time machine.

[Guest Chrissie29]

That's a really nice poem. Hope I could have some letter like this from myself when I was 14

[Guest SusanB]

Love it! If it were not for the paradox effects I'd totally send something like that to the ten year old me and my mom, just as soon as I have access to a time machine.

We can only dream, Melissa

I'd chance the paradox

[Guest Angel Heart]

Thank you all for your wonderful feedback. We can only dream to send something like this back in time...

[Guest miss kindheart]

I didn't think it cheesy at all

<<<< hug >>>> Accalia

u did good

vanna