See Me

[Guest shotgun_sinner]

Wrote this last november when I was trying to come out to people....

See Me

I am neither boy nor girl

Man nor woman

Adult nor child

But you know me

I am the one sitting in the corner

Crying until my heart bleeds

The one treated as an unwanted foreigner

Knowing nothing of what I need

You continue on in your self righteous religion

And you know me

You hate me for my darkness

My weight using wasted space

Truth can not make you recognize

The hurt you bring when you give chase

Fight me off, tooth and nail

You think you know me

I am neither boy nor girl

Skin makes us who we are

See threw the skin and tissue

See to my insides and push them away

See straight down to my being

And then you may know me

~SS

[Guest Emily H]

Ah, makes a good point, has a nice flow and rhythm to it, its great!

[Guest shotgun_sinner]

*blushes*

Thanks... I didnt know if I wanted to post it or not, but considering no one else has ever seen it (except for the bowls of my computer! ) I thought I might give it a shot.

Thanks! It means a lot.

blessed be your day!

~SS

[Guest Joanna Phipps]

*blushes*

Thanks... I didnt know if I wanted to post it or not, but considering no one else has ever seen it (except for the bowls of my computer! ) I thought I might give it a shot.

Thanks! It means a lot.

blessed be your day!

~SS

DOnt worry bout how things read, how the meter is or the rhyme. Most of what I do is free verse (keeping meter in time and rhyme bends my brain too much). Many will find meanings here that you didnt think were there but all input is welcome and appreciated.

[Sally]

Poetry is so much more open to the reader's interpretation than prose.

That is why I am so glad that I finally learned how to connect to my heart and write poetry.

You can reach people on so many levels - this was very good.

Love ya,

Sally

[Guest shotgun_sinner]

DOnt worry bout how things read, how the meter is or the rhyme. Most of what I do is free verse (keeping meter in time and rhyme bends my brain too much). Many will find meanings here that you didnt think were there but all input is welcome and appreciated.

Thank you. It means a lot to have people that understand and maybe even *like* my randomness spewed on the paper... hehe

I agree, meter and rhyme are just to much effort to worry about!

Poetry is so much more open to the reader's interpretation than prose.

That is why I am so glad that I finally learned how to connect to my heart and write poetry.

You can reach people on so many levels - this was very good.

Love ya,

Sally

Thanks Sally. I've read some of your poetry before and I was floored! It is amazing, then for you to tell me this was good... hehe

You can reach a lot of people in a lot of different ways with poetry. I love it!

Thanks!

~SS

[Guest Jean Davis]

Simply WONDERFUL!!!

You have quite a gift.

Hope to read more sometime soon.

LUV

Jean

[Guest shotgun_sinner]

Thanks.

A gift? wow.

Thank you, and more shall follow! (if I get my lazy butt up to doing it )

~SS

[Guest Joanna Phipps]

(if I get my lazy butt up to doing it )

~SS

for me when the muse strikes (kinda sounds like a song) i find I have to write. It is the same with my connection to the spirit realm, when they have something to say.. I need to pay attention and write what is given.

[Guest shotgun_sinner]

for me when the muse strikes (kinda sounds like a song) i find I have to write. It is the same with my connection to the spirit realm, when they have something to say.. I need to pay attention and write what is given.

Its kinda the same for me, but once and a while I'll just want to write and I'll just put words on paper until it makes sense.. Thats what happened here.. I wanted something that I could show people when I came out so I wrote until it made sense. Fortunatly it only took one rough draft then the final copy! Rarely does that happen!

But sometimes the mood (or muse hehe) hits me and I have to grab my pen and paper to get it out...

Just depends!

~SS

[Guest Joanna Phipps]

Its kinda the same for me, but once and a while I'll just want to write and I'll just put words on paper until it makes sense.. Thats what happened here.. I wanted something that I could show people when I came out so I wrote until it made sense. Fortunatly it only took one rough draft then the final copy! Rarely does that happen!

But sometimes the mood (or muse hehe) hits me and I have to grab my pen and paper to get it out...

Just depends!

~SS

one draft... WOW that many (giggle) most of what I write doesnt even get the draft.. or maybe its the final it doesnt get... IDK.. just babbling now.. its way too late in my shift for me to make sense

[Guest mynw]

Wrote this last november when I was trying to come out to people....

See Me

I am neither boy nor girl

Man nor woman

Adult nor child

But you know me

I am the one sitting in the corner

Crying until my heart bleeds

The one treated as an unwanted foreigner

Knowing nothing of what I need

You continue on in your self righteous religion

And you know me

You hate me for my darkness

My weight using wasted space

Truth can not make you recognize

The hurt you bring when you give chase

Fight me off, tooth and nail

You think you know me

I am neither boy nor girl

Skin makes us who we are

See threw the skin and tissue

See to my insides and push them away

See straight down to my being

And then you may know me

~SS

give me chance my love SS for driving my feeling with that lovely

poetry please:

I like that poetry; words and feeling spreading inside it,,

my sweetie SS,

and I hope you are now coming out from,pains coming from

people's snaring eyes on you,,

that happen for all and making us feeling so sad,but my love

the only solution what I believe are:

-looking kind for those people,what live in dark corner

of misunderstanding humanity secrets and needs.

- and why on earth we need to take care for the at this point,,

I know; Sally one time said (If I am understanding her very well),

that coming because people seeking scaling(good or bad) from another people looking to them,,

that are fully wrong,

what is making people great or another is only behave principles

what they believe and work with it.

not money,beauty,body,power,star life,,all that are extra vanity,,

when all that finish one day, will remain behave only,

when I am at grave one day what I will take with me(big nothing)

from all that except how I behave with all.any how that what i believe

honey I don't know about another friends here.

by that pains of give people chance to controlling our life by pains,,

many of us looking for end them selves,that so hard beyond my thinking,,

we love people but not live to be as people like,bad or good,,

by that we will gain our peace,freedom as will as love

people.

love you

Bulloo