Ok, All You Poets!

[Guest Donna Jean]

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Ok, so I was working in the poetry forum this afternoon and it struck me...

????Why are all of these poems so dark? Misery, pain, angst, hurt, darkness.....

Ya get what I'm saying?

Well, Dee Jay needs a break!

Where's the bunnies?

The puffy clouds?

I wanna hear about some DANG puppies!

FLOWERS...WE NEED SOME FARKIN FLOWERS!

BIRDIES.....DO SOME BIRDIES!!!!

I WANT SOMTHIN' NICE, DANG IT!!!!!!

*WHEEZE...PANT...PANT*

thank you....

Dee Jay

[Guest Lee-Asher Geo-James]

I added two love poems

[Guest Hildagard]

You want something fluffy pony doggy kitten stuff hmm...

The kitten is so fluffy

Her hair is long and cute

Not netted mane or plated armour

abnormalities? Quite minute.

There

[Guest chngnwnd]

How about poems about genetic engineering and cannibalism?

hugs

Bobbie (travellin' 'rpound the world dressed like minnie pearl )

[Guest Cowboy]

Uh, id say april showers bring may flowers but not so sure how nice that is.

lol.

so uhmm here ill give it a shot.

Down here in Georgia i go huntin for bunnies.

Chase down deer with the hound dogs that used to be puppies.

When the gun goes off, its not really that loud.

but it sends all the birdies flyin off to the clouds.

( Rofl. :lol: )

[JJ]

The dang Puppies fell off the porch

Amid the Farkin Flowers

While birdies sang for hours and hours

)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Oh Bunnies sweet the grass did eat

While puffy coulds lined up all neat!

Just as you requested Dee Jay. Glad to oblige. All ya had to do was ask!!

Love you

JJ

[Carolyn Marie]

Bambi ran in fields so green,

She knelt at brook to drink,

Peaceful was the sky so blue,

Bambi stopped to take a think.

Where was her kindly mother now,

What could the matter be?

Was she talking to Mr. Rabbit,

On whose field they ran carefree?

I'm sorry, said the hoot owl,

I'm afraid the news is bad,

Mr. Cheney shot your mother,

Sarah Palin bagged your dad.

Carolyn Marie

[Guest Opal]

- A Spring's Sunny Day -

A Spring's Sunny Day

Little snow left to melt away

A meadow of grass, life has returned

Renewed hope and joy, birds swoop and sing

Graceful and with purpose

Mother and her bunnies playing, munches carefully

Watchful of her world

Calm and serene, this Spring's Sunny Day

Opal

[JJ]

The dang Puppies fell off the porch

Amid the Farkin Flowers

While birdies sang for hours and hours

)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Oh Bunnies sweet the grass did eat

While puffy coulds lined up all neat!

Just as you requested Dee Jay. Glad to oblige. All ya had to do was ask!!

Love you

JJ

Clouds-durn it-clouds. Not coulds

JJ the dyslexic

[Sally]

A Sunny Bunny Tail For Dee Jay

I have a friend who I sometimes call Miss Bugg

She was getting depressed and so needed a HUGG

She read about gloom and she read about pain next she read of duress

So much that she was finding herself feeling a great deal of stress

She called out for a poem of all sweetness and light

Not another of darkness and moaning about our plight

No not another of horrors and dread

Nothing so horrid to fill her head

She spoke of clouds and flowers and bright sunny days

Then mentions bunnies and I saw the error of our ways

We are so often told of the need to wake up and smell the roses

We have walked around in blinders with the roses under our noses

We wait until Easter to give our children any bunnies

Although what can be sweeter than these little honeys

Birthdays and Christmas are the time to get puppies for them

Like there is no need the rest of the year to please our kin

Flowers are a beautiful expression of the Earth's awakening

After a long cold winter comes that wonderful season Spring

With the grass so green and the flowers so bright

Puffy white clouds hover until day becomes night

The bunnies huddle together warm in the hutch

The puppies curl up on the bed not asking much

Outside the window the crickets and cicadas begin to sing

In the darkness a wonderful sound the symphony of Spring

If we look at all this beauty in our big world all around

We should write more about all the happiness we found

Cheer up my dear friend and please feel no more dismay

I have written of this beauty for you my precious Dee Jay

Love ya,

Sally

[Guest Donna Jean]

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snif'....sniff'.....

That's more like it everyone....

Sally ...you've touched my heart one more time...

I love it....bunnies and all.....

LOVE

Dee Jay

[Flint]

Because there is so much emotion put into sad writings. And writing without emotion isn't too good.

That is my reason.

These days I tend to write sad but ALWAYS put a positive note at the end. Like about how I'm getting through it and it's making me stronger and such. I never used to do that or be able to for that matter. So yea. I guess it's slow progress.

Love, pain, darkness all true raw emotions.

I know my view may seem somewhat depressing

But what is raw about the emotion of happiness? Maybe I'm more depressed than I realised!

[Guest nior]

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Ok, so I was working in the poetry forum this afternoon and it struck me...

????Why are all of these poems so dark? Misery, pain, angst, hurt, darkness.....

Ya get what I'm saying?

Well, Dee Jay needs a break!

Where's the bunnies?

The puffy clouds?

I wanna hear about some DANG puppies!

FLOWERS...WE NEED SOME FARKIN FLOWERS!

BIRDIES.....DO SOME BIRDIES!!!!

I WANT SOMTHIN' NICE, DANG IT!!!!!!

*WHEEZE...PANT...PANT*

thank you....

Dee Jay

Dee Jay,

I can only write from

where my heart is

if it's to ring true

To the reader

While releasing an inner tension

Which has been block

For too long.

What would you

Rather have

Happy, but hollow words

Or sorrowful, but truthful ones

The choice is your's

My dear.

[Guest Renny-sama]

.

Ok, so I was working in the poetry forum this afternoon and it struck me...

????Why are all of these poems so dark? Misery, pain, angst, hurt, darkness.....

Ya get what I'm saying?

Well, Dee Jay needs a break!

Where's the bunnies?

The puffy clouds?

I wanna hear about some DANG puppies!

FLOWERS...WE NEED SOME FARKIN FLOWERS!

BIRDIES.....DO SOME BIRDIES!!!!

I WANT SOMTHIN' NICE, DANG IT!!!!!!

*WHEEZE...PANT...PANT*

thank you....

Dee Jay

Well I'm not much of a poet but how about a story about a boy who ends up Crossdressing because of a bribe?

[Guest Donna Jean]

Dee Jay,

I can only write from

where my heart is

if it's to ring true

To the reader

While releasing an inner tension

Which has been block

For too long.

What would you

Rather have

Happy, but hollow words

Or sorrowful, but truthful ones

The choice is your's

My dear.

Dear Heart.....

It was meant in fun....tongue in cheek....

No offense intended to those of a darker passion......

Donna Jean

[Guest 91curiouskitten]

Roses are red

Tires are black

Why is my chest

As flat as my back T_T

You know you cracked a grin >.>

[Guest Donna Jean]

Hee Hee........

Dee Jay

[Guest Sam_P]

Roses are red

Tires are black

Why is my chest

As flat as my back T_T

You know you cracked a grin >.>

Lol, very good. I have to admit to a grin. I feel it should come with a doodle. Artists!?

[Guest Elizabeth K]

Bambi ran in fields so green,

She knelt at brook to drink,

Peaceful was the sky so blue,

Bambi stopped to take a think.

Where was her kindly mother now,

What could the matter be?

Was she talking to Mr. Rabbit,

On whose field they ran carefree?

I'm sorry, said the hoot owl,

I'm afraid the news is bad,

Mr. Cheney shot your mother,

Sarah Palin bagged your dad.

Carolyn Marie

OMG

FUNNY!

[Guest Esperanza Xochitl]

Hey, I've been significantly less dark in my writing lately. Considering how beyond dark I normally am I would point out that should be a heavenly summer vacation for you. :D

[Guest nior]

Dear Heart.....

It was meant in fun....tongue in cheek....

No offense intended to those of a darker passion......

Donna Jean

Sorry, sometimes it's hard to tell what is meant as a joke and what's serious for me. Am having extremely bad wk, here.

nior