Preview For My Series

[Guest Neuro]

This is a preview for my BL story I'm making a novel and a comic out of fufu~ The preview is in poetry for (but I am bad at poetry) so is sort haiku-ish. 5-7-5 format OTL

"Blood Type: Be Positive!" is a dark comedy about a young man who bears the unfortunate name of Adolf Hitler VonChrist. He has lived a life full of nothing but being convinced that one day he will die, because his father and mother (a funeral home director and mortician) see little value to life aside from business. One day, Adolf discovers that sometimes the dead are not all they appear to be; and becomes the lover of a Vampire named Toby, who's origins are unknown to this country. Toby escapes his death through Adolf's life, and Adolf escapes his life in Toby's cold arms... the two eventually become more than master and servant; and fall in love...

I'm such a sap sometimes OTL This is all from Adolf's perspective ne. Yeah, this IS a comedy but fffff it has serious bits o'course~

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Mother, I can't lie

I often think you don't care

Heart cold as his skin

Father, down the stairs

Cutting up the dead bodies

Worth more than my life

Brother, up the hall

I do care for you dearly

But I am grown now

I have been possessed

Not that you noticed before

Deep under his spell

His heart without pulse

Mine pounds like never before

He feeds off of me

Blood as our contract

Cruelty becoming love

Love is so simple

At first, fear blinds me

For my own and his sake

How can he hold back?

I could not hold back.

I don’t think I could hold back…

I know I could not.

Patience of the gods

I then know nothing to fear

In this cold embrace

My arms around him,

I close my eyes desperate

I want him to feel…

Take all of my blood

To hold you as of always

Make my wish come true.

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FFFFFFFFFFhehehe tried to keep PG-13 yay for me

I am determined to PWN 'Twilight' with my vampires who do not sparkle, and my protagonists named after despicable war criminals.

[Guest 1charlotte1]

This is a preview for my BL story I'm making a novel and a comic out of fufu~ The preview is in poetry for (but I am bad at poetry) so is sort haiku-ish. 5-7-5 format OTL

"Blood Type: Be Positive!" is a dark comedy about a young man who bears the unfortunate name of Adolf Hitler VonChrist. He has lived a life full of nothing but being convinced that one day he will die, because his father and mother (a funeral home director and mortician) see little value to life aside from business. One day, Adolf discovers that sometimes the dead are not all they appear to be; and becomes the lover of a Vampire named Toby, who's origins are unknown to this country. Toby escapes his death through Adolf's life, and Adolf escapes his life in Toby's cold arms... the two eventually become more than master and servant; and fall in love...

I'm such a sap sometimes OTL This is all from Adolf's perspective ne. Yeah, this IS a comedy but fffff it has serious bits o'course~

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Mother, I can't lie

I often think you don't care

Heart cold as his skin

Father, down the stairs

Cutting up the dead bodies

Worth more than my life

Brother, up the hall

I do care for you dearly

But I am grown now

I have been possessed

Not that you noticed before

Deep under his spell

His heart without pulse

Mine pounds like never before

He feeds off of me

Blood as our contract

Cruelty becoming love

Love is so simple

At first, fear blinds me

For my own and his sake

How can he hold back?

I could not hold back.

I don’t think I could hold back…

I know I could not.

Patience of the gods

I then know nothing to fear

In this cold embrace

My arms around him,

I close my eyes desperate

I want him to feel…

Take all of my blood

To hold you as of always

Make my wish come true.

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FFFFFFFFFFhehehe tried to keep PG-13 yay for me

I am determined to PWN 'Twilight' with my vampires who do not sparkle, and my protagonists named after despicable war criminals.

I'm sure u will pwn twilight *that movie made me ashamed to be a vampire lover*

I love what I've heard of the story! It is right up my alley! I am quite excited to read it!! It literally gave me butterflies to read about. It reminds me of me and my family(minus the working with dead bodies lol)

Lemme knownwhen I can read it k?

[Sally]

Have you considered adopting a new name - Necromancer?

It would be such a good pen name for this novel.

Very good - I like the idea of revealing characters through Haiku.

Love ya,

Sally

[Guest Neuro]

I am still kind of working on a name, I didn't choose "Necromancer" because a) people have a prejudice against the word (although it's an interesting one) and I was not sure if the title had already been used by another author.

XD I am terrible at names~

[Sally]

I liked your title - don't change it I was suggesting it as part of your name on the book M Night Shyamalan.

Michael Neromancer (last name).

Or M. Necromancer (last name).

How about Michael Necromancer?

It is so fitting for the story.

Love ya,

Sally

[Guest leo]

yup awsum poem, awsum name

neuromancers are awsum ever read sabriel?!!

poem was very good, any pictures?

and i lived vampires, but twilight was RUBBISH

[Guest Neuro]

I agree Leo--I don't have anything against Twilight fans; but good heavens I felt so embarrassed to be reading it, I could not finish...

I want to read Sabriel! I have heard good things of it.

Necromancer seems like a very good name, but unless something happens to my friend I am writing under the name of our studio ("Daioh! Productions") we just go by "Daioh! Productions", every once and a while we put in our pen names for credits Kitten and Michael (formerly 'Sakura,' which is why my deviantart username is Daioh--Sakura ffffff)

Because even though this is my story, Kitten helps with things like scripting and computer layouts; as well as character design. With hers, I help with inking and some art and some scripting. So, it is a tiny little studio production XD Kind of like CLAMP from the C-town ghetto (our nickname for our neighborhood hurhur)

[Guest Eth]

I love the poem! And the story sounds like it could be interesting. ^^

[Guest Neuro]

Danke, Eth~ >:3 It's "Interesting" but also very ridiculous ohoho (because ridiculous is what I do best mwohoho)