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[TTheta]

So here is a bit of context. I was trying to write lyrics about a couple who transition together and this is what I came up with so far, I am open to critiques! :)) 

 

Words can hurt your pride

But nothing heals like time

And if you’re in the dark

Even worlds apart

I will be right here

To care for you my dear

 

The world may be bitter 

And the world might be cruel 

But hold out for me

Cause my heart goes to you

 

You deserve the entire world

I want to make you laugh and smile

I know that you have been hurt

 But I’ll make sure you know you’re worthwhile

 

You hit me right in the feels

And brought out the best in me

Heart made of steel

And you were the key

Had me head over heels

Like I could do anything

Spinning like wheels

 To this day I will sing 

To what it reveals

And for what it may bring

 

The future is ours

To make what we can of it

So we look to the stars

To send us into orbit

 

Just hold onto my hand

And I’ll hold onto you

Together we’ll stand

And get ready for life part two

 

[A. Dillon]

Well, the title is indicative of the text, but that "right in the feels" line is priceless. Good job bub :))