So I've Just Started Trying Recently

[Guest Kitsunenene]

So hiya thar. Ariel here

I hadn't really tried working on my voice since my family's always around

but lately they've been gone for at least an hour everyday and that's given me about a week and a half to start this thing up

After much trying and failing I feel like I'm getting there

so now I'd like you to tell me where to go from here if you could. Like what to improve and such.

Comment and suggesti-it's all in my sample....

anyways I can't be held responsible for bleeding ears...

http://www.mediafire.com/?4lmmgzojyjt

thanks

Ariel

P.S. I don't have a fancy site like some of you so is mediafire ok?

[Guest sarah f]

I listened to the recording and you have a soft but not to be mean cartoonish voice. I really think you are at a good starting point though. You just need to get it to sound a little louder and not so soft. Just to let you know, I am having the same problem with my voice when I am working on it. I found I can sing pretty good like a girl but talking is another story. Just remember that this is going to be the hardest thing for us MTF's to get down. You already look beautiful and once you get the voice down there will be no stopping you. Keep it up and you will get there.

Love,

Sarah F

[Guest nymphblossom]

That's a fantastic start, Ariel! You have the inflections and rhythm down. I'm thinking the pitch might be a little high even for someone in her teens. Maybe you might consider bringing it down a little to give your voice more serious tone?

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[Guest Mila]

Hi Ariel!

Wow! I think it's a great start! More than great! for the amount of time you spent on it!

Once you will lower the pitch a little bit- gonna sound absolutely beautiful.

Keep it up!

Mila

[Guest Jhira]

You know, I have a friend who sounds very similar to you. It works for her because she has a very tiny frame. Still, that is a very impressive voice you have, especially after only a week and a half !

[Guest Jean Davis]

Hi Ariel

Well I have to agree with the others, it is a bit high. But being that you are young and your voice has not come down naturally yet I think if you continue to practice like you have your voice will drop into a natural pitch as you get older.

You're doing very well keep up the good work.

LUV

Jean

[Sally]

It is wonderful that you have all of the inflections down already - very good now if you can relax just a little the pitch will lower to a more expected range.

However my sister's voice was that high until her forties but she did get a few looks as she got older.

Love ya,

Sally

[Guest viv]

Your almost there hun ,,,awsome , well done,luv,viv

[Guest Mikku]

nooo you deleted it... i wanted to hear.. lol i need to compare myself to others who are starting out.... ^^, would you mind putting it back up or recording another? ill trade you for my TERRIBLE voice (just started 3 days ago)