Thinking Of Writing

[Guest 91curiouskitten]

The world is our own. Neko's, Vampires, Demons, they dont exist, the worlds biggest issue is its economy, the childrens biggest concern is how much longer is school, a tail is not normal, nobody is special, the world is mundane. On the outside at least. For hundreds of years, there is a group of people, Purifiers, that hunt down and kill 'Taints'. The purifiers are people who once followed the way of God, and worked in his ways, but over time, they grew corrupt.

A Purifier is a person who hunts the Taints. They seek to purify the world of the taints, to cleanse the world of these impurities and make all right. At least, thats how they started. However, as with all other groups, none are free from temptation, and none are free from their desires. Eventually the work of God became the work of money. Or pure sport. The Purfiers are now a simple bunch fo afreanline addicts, peopel who enjoy the rush of hunting another human being, except this taints, are no normal human beings, and thus, the thrill.

A taint, is a indivudal with abhuman appearence of ability. The neko's,. the natural born vampires, the pyrokentitcs, the nymphs and demons and angels. Those who do not fit, and thus disrutp the flow. In the times of God and the orignial purifiers, the taints knew full and well they were being hunted. The kings gave the purifiers freedom from punishment. They are not murderers for killing taints, they are purifiers, cleanisng the realms. As time went on, the taints grew more and more public, unaware of the fact they were being hunted. Few survive meeting a purifier, and the fights always only have one winner. Weather the purifiers lsoes a life, or the tains fall, death is always the end. However, a purifier cannot simply walk around, shoointg whom they wish, they must be stealthy, leave no trail, for today, it is murder.

It is 2019, the world of the future. No flying cars everywhere, but they are there. What was predicted as household is there, but far from cheap. More and more taints are showing and appearing, and mroe and mroe are disappearing from the public mysteriusly. IT is seen as a disease, but to some, a pleasure. They go for high price on the market of slavery, they are used as spoekpeopel and models for their abilities, they are harvested by the government, to try and create super soldiers. And still, the purified are there, hunting, trying to cleanse the world, or gain some fun, regrardless they hunt the taints, but they are mroe dangerous know. They have disappeared, the taints do no know they are beign hunted, they only know they are different, but are uabnware of the dangers they poise for themselves by revealing.

The room is dark, there are no lights, the rough feel of burnt fire retardnet padding surrounded our girl, her soft skin running over the material, the walls, roof and flooring covered in it, unsure of the exact color, she was clad only in a pair of jeans, and a T-shirt, no underclothing. Her name was 849. Her parents were dead. Her parents died years ago, by her hand. As an infant, she was born, and her body watsed no time learnign self defense. With the sharp sting of the doctos hand, her body was immidately coated in flames. She was the only urvivor from the assumed explosion. However, after four homes in only her first year, she was quickly recognized as a freak. Her abilities were discovered, but she was diferent. Pryo kenetics are nothing new, they are rare but they are handled appropriately. She was different. She matured early, and she had strength and pwoer beyond any adbhuman, pyrokentic or not, her body and literal genetic straint disappear, she becomes a simple body of flames, nto coating, but true, down to her genetic structure flames. After her strength and pwoers were discovered to teir fullest potential, near H-bomb destructive capabilities, the government claimed her before the purifiers could. She has been tested on her entire life, stres tested, tortured to try and activate, and thsu study, her abilitiels, her life has been one of pain. Whipped, to0rtured, she was driven to the point, and finally over. The smallest sounds terrifies her, she trusts nobody, and many lifes have fallen to her fear. She is kept in a padded room, having had no human itneraction since she was 12, she sits in her dark fire padded room, eats three meals a day, sleeps, and nothign else. She si to dangerous to go in public, but, the law rpevents them from claimign her life, and unofficaly, it ahs been tried, but it cannot be done. Her body destroys any poisons she inhales or takes into ehr body, an internal purification system, anyone with a gun doesnt lvie long enough to pull the trigger. They even went to try drowning, fillign ehr room. It turned to steam, she cannot kill, nor can she be killed. She is unaware though, of the group coming for her. Who shall reach ehr first? A fellow taint, or the purifiers?

Maybey a good book idea?

[Guest Melanie Dawn]

Sounds like a lot of stuff... be wary of using vampires, either people will only want them or despise it for you using them, i for one, think vamps are played out-thanks twilight.

Melanie Dawn

[Guest Evan_J]

I like this story. It would be my kind of story (I only meant to read a snipet, felt my eyes all open, read on....) It needs editing of course for grammar and spelling but the story itself is gooood. Vampires are doable (cuz there eternally are "vamp heads" ) but the catch is you have to do em differently if you're gonna do em. Anne Rice won in her time because she came with the concept of day walking "public" vampires. A LOT has been done with vampires since then. What could you do with your vampires , what quality could there be about them that has not been seen? THATS what you'll have to be innovative regarding.

[Guest Elizabeth K]

GRAND

A book has its own way of writing itself. I think you have a wonderful stage and a wonderful perimeter to write within. So GO AND BE FRUITFUL! Put this baby together!

Lizzy

[Guest jrm]

please write that book i really really want to read it

[Milly]

I'd read it, that' saying something too since it's hard for me to settle down with a book. Well at least with these forums here =)