Sometimes You Fail

[Guest Elizabeth K]

Failed Concern

Friend said no

Don't need to hear

I know my way

Don't tell me dear

What do I do

Don't want me there

Tune me out

Don't care I care

It hurt me so

Don't want to stay

Won't do me good

Don't like that way

Do what you want

Won't hear me sigh

I'll go away

Won't hear me cry.

So go your way

Do what it takes

Make your error

Make mistakes

[JJ]

It is a good poem but sounds like a bad situation

Love

Johnny

[Guest Emily Ray]

I concur with John.

Huggs

Emily

[Sally]

Sometimes, you offer help and it is rejected, offer again if they reject it again - continue to offer your help but to others who will accept it.

You have a great deal to offer to so many, you have helped me through so much in my life, do not let one failure stop you.

Love ya,

Sally

[Guest miss kindheart]

<<<< hug >>>> Lizzy

Nice poem

vanna