Deathly Poem

[Guest Serene]

When depression hits hard I sometimes write my feelings. Here's a short exerpt into the darkness in my soul... don't read if you don't like dark things please.

Burn burn, laugh and cry

it rains blood when they die

two eyes two teeth

the deamon breaths

hate and crime

I hate the crime!

kill them all and be liberated

or suffer life, it's contaminated

Hail! My life

Oh wait it's gone

spun into strife

this hell goes on

Burn burn, laugh and cry

"suck it up", no I think I'll die

[Guest Julie T]

You Cannot Transition If You Are Dead

You think you'll die

You think they'll cry

And wonder why

And they won't

They dig down deep

And let you sleep

The worms will creep

Live you don't

And transition day

Has gone away

A male you stay

yourself gone

So suffer do

Accepting who

what is is you

Until it's done

We need to survive to become ourselves

Julie

[Guest ~Brenda~]

A very wise member here said something very important...

I wish that I could remember the member's name so that I could give them direct credit....

Anyway this is what they said...

"Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem"

Think about that...

Love

Brenda

[Guest miss kindheart]

Hi Serene,

<<< hug >>>

Was a sad poem , the title made me think of the serenity prayer

God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change; courage to change the things I can; and wisdom to know the difference.

vanna

[Guest Serene]

You Cannot Transition If You Are Dead

You think you'll die

You think they'll cry

And wonder why

And they won't

They dig down deep

And let you sleep

The worms will creep

Live you don't

And transition day

Has gone away

A male you stay

yourself gone

So suffer do

Accepting who

what is is you

Until it's done

We need to survive to become ourselves

Julie

Hehe what a clever response. That witty opposition simply made my giggle. Thank you

*hugs*

Serene

A very wise member here said something very important...

I wish that I could remember the member's name so that I could give them direct credit....

Anyway this is what they said...

"Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem"

Think about that...

Love

Brenda

Perhaps it is. But there are more than a single perspective. Those words in and of themselves are poetic. I don't mean to say that I follow my words, but expressing emotion through art in any form is very helpful in balancing out my feelings. I won't lie that lately I have actually thought about whether or not the end would bring peace, but I've not chosen to actually go through with it. I'm not done living, not yet. Thanks.

*hugs*

Serene

Hi Serene,

<<< hug >>>

Was a sad poem , the title made me think of the serenity prayer

God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change; courage to change the things I can; and wisdom to know the difference.

vanna

Yes, I know. Sorry I posted one of my sadder expressions. I typically preffer my more happy upbeat works. Most, if not all, of my art is fueled by feeling and emotion. I simply wrote this poem when I was feeling awful, it was a way I could vent when I had nobody to talk to. I remember that prayer you spoke. It's so simplistic and yet far more intricate than it seems. Quite humbling as well. Thank you.

*huggles*

Serene

Thank you all. I was a bit worried for posting a darker form of my poetry, but I'm very pleased with all these clever replies of wisdom ^^

With love and appreciation

*hugs for all*